Author | Joseph L. Selby

Filling in the Middle

I still haven’t started revision on THE TRIAD SOCIETY. Things keep cruising along with JEHOVAH’S HITLIST. One of my original reasons for getting TTS squared away was because I wanted to go to World Fantasy Con in Columbus. I’ve gone over the con website a dozen times. As con websites go, nothing on it has sold me on going there. What did sell me was the presence of Sara Megibow from the Nelson Literary Agency. NLA is at the top of my list of agencies I want to work with and has been for some time. The opportunity to meet Sara in person and perhaps overcome the suckitude that is my queries was appealing.

Of course, I just started a new job and rather than being busy in the summer, it’s busy in the winter. I also took a slight pay cut. All this combined to have me withdraw from attending my wife’s competition at Harmony, Inc’s international barbershop competition in New Brunswick. Now, World Fantasy Con is a month earlier, so a case can be made that I could go to it and not IC&C. Of course, when the one is supporting myself and one the other is supporting my wife, I think it’s a little selfish to withdraw from the one only to do the other.

Depending on my workload, I may not be able to do either regardless. So, the time crunch created by having a finished and finalized manuscript of THE TRIAD SOCIETY is gone if I don’t go to WFC (and no, I would not pitch anything to Sara it wasn’t in a state that I could hand it to her on the spot and feel confident it was an adequate representation of my skills.

This is good because I have not stopped working on JEHOVAH’S HITLIST. I’m coming to the end of the edges. Writing a novel by the seat of your pants (vs plotting, pantsing vs plotting, I’m a pantser) is like putting together a puzzle. You have a scattered mess of ideas that you need to arrange and put together to form a coherent picture. Like any puzzle you start with the easiest pieces, placing the corners and then the edges. Eventually you have to fill in the middle. That’s when you reach that point in the story where you can’t skirt around the plot any more. You need to decide on protagonist and antagonist motivations, decisions, and outcomes.

In JH, the main character (aptly named Jehovah) is forced to kill five people or the Hanged Man will kill him and his entire family. Of those five people, I only know the name of one. I know the profession of two others. I need to figure out how these five people are connected (I have a loose understanding, like edge pieces with very distinctive holes that allow you to connect a middle piece) and how Jehovah is going to navigate his interaction with these five people to reach the climax of the story.

This is much harder (like the middle of a puzzle). So, once I get to that grind, maybe I’ll switch back to TTS. But you know, right now, it doesn’t feel like I will. This is really rolling. I have a good vision of this setting. I’ll need to revise to make a lot of the character dialect consistent, but I knew that from the beginning. For a first draft, this is coming along swimmingly.


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3 responses to “Filling in the Middle”

  1. Elizabeth Poole

    I admire your ability to fill in the missing pieces of the plot. I need to start out with a greater understanding of the events in order for everything to work out. I don't plan everything out, or I lose all interest in writing the book, but I have to have a few stepping stones, shall we say, in order to be able to make it to the end.

  2. Joseph L. Selby

    I first conceived of JH after Bush refused Kyoto. I envisioned a future with him getting re-elected (d'oh), the ocean's rising, and the world being barely inhabitable. I was inspired by the picture I always had in my head what it would be like to live in the Hive in Games Workshop's "Necromunda" setting. Platform cities above and ghettos below.
    Here's what I knew, there was a thriving society for the wealthy above. Tjere was gang warfire and the struggle to survive below. The main character was named Jehovah. His mother had abandoned him and his two younger brothers (the youngest of which is mentally handicapped). They have a paternal teacher named Old Hobbe that teaches them to read, write, history of how the world ended, etc. The villain was named the Hanged Man necause he survived getting hanged by the police. Jehovah crosses him and has to kill five people to protect his family from the Hanged Man's retribution.

    I didn't know four of the five five people. I didn't know what Jehovah did to cross the Hanged Man or much else of the world. I've filled in those holes as I went along.

    (The story is similar to my original concept from 6 years ago, but Bush didn't end the world, Jehovah is now white, and "the Nation" is no longer Denver, it's in Monroevia Africa.

  3. Joseph L. Selby

    Oh and Old Hobbe is less paternal and is now a gay pedophile. That shocked the hell out of me when I realized that.

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