Author | Joseph L. Selby

He Makes the Turn! He Approaches the Finish Line! …OH NO, HE’S TRIPPED!

So all other obligations were set aside for this evening. Yes, I’m supposed to be making left overs so my wife has something to eat for lunch tomorrow, but she’ll understand. This is ART!

I’m flying along and get to the last chapter (now considering making it the second to last). I’m about to have the protagonist parachute from a platform city after killing a few people when I realize…

These two people can’t be here at the same time. And those two items which I just described can’t be there at the same time. In fact, none of these people can be here. Dammit! This entire scene isn’t possible!

So, end of the book is postponed until tomorrow. Poop.

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2 responses to “He Makes the Turn! He Approaches the Finish Line! …OH NO, HE’S TRIPPED!”

  1. Elizabeth Poole

    Awwwww I hate it when I am flying along with a scene when I realize it makes no logical sense at all! There's always tomorrow…

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  2. Joseph L. Selby

    I fixed it this morning, but then ran into another problem. I need a character present so Jehovah can get his gun back. (He could use another gun he has, but I want him to have his Colt.) But then the parachute and who's staying where and why would someone live down below if he could stay up above and blah blah blah.

    This may be something I need to fix in revision. Also realized that the drop box couldn't go up Saturday night and go back down Sunday morning unless they have more than one. I'll have to sort that out somehow. But that's definitely something for revision.

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