Tag: revision
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Loose Sheep
Writing a novel is a daunting thing. It doesn’t happen in a day, so it’s easy to forget things that you introduced early on. One of the things you have to do during revision is find all the loose threads and take care of them. You may miss things. You can be so focused on…
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Telegraphing the Play
Writing a novel is like writing a sports play, it may look familiar, but you don’t want the reader to know the play that’s coming. I know some people read for the experience, but some people (like me) read for the surprise. That’s why I hate spoilers so much. If the surprise is ruined for…
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Dystopia, Genre, and Finishing the First Draft
You may find yourself asking, where has Joe been? He hasn’t been posting three times a day. That’s night like you. You may also find yourself living in a shotgun shack. You may find yourself in another part of the world. If it’s the former, December is when I have to work. And not just…
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Wind Sprint: WHAT’S BEHIND THE CROOKED DOOR?
This story began as a ponderance. I thought of it from time to time. It sat in my brain like a seed. Will it sprout or will it just lay there? It sprouted a little, but I doubted enough to make a story out of it. My wife then asked me what I was talking…
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Wind Sprint: THE SEVENTH SACRIFICE
I’m not keen on giving up on a manuscript, but sometimes a thing is broke so bad it can’t be fixed1. THE SEVENTH SACRIFICE was a manuscript I abandoned because it was all wrong. There were a few chapters I enjoyed (the introductions of the tinkers), but it boiled down to Cheshire getting off his…
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Wind Sprints
I wrote the first draft of THE TRIAD SOCIETY. I didn’t like it. It wasn’t bad necessarily. It just wasn’t the story I set out to write. The story I had planned was this huge intricate intrigue that spanned the politics of the university, the city, the kingdom! And in the end, a meeting made…
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I’d like a #3, super sized.
LurkerWithout reads a billion books a month. This is why I value his feedback as a beta reader. He reads a book a day, so I consider him a measure of the purchasing public. He’s the target audience I’m aiming for, people who like to read fantasy. I have no delusions of being the author…
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Clipping
Next time you’re listening to an audio medium (such as the radio or a podcast), listen to how the person speaks rather than just what they’re saying. Much like “he said” as a dialogue signifier, there are certain sounds that go along with actual words that our brain just ignores. The inhalation at the beginning…